Once the rough cuts were uploaded onto each of our blogs , we all got together as a class and showed our videos in order to give and receive feedback in order to help improve our music videos.
Feedback 1- Good opening timings, match in the beat with the song.
- Female keeps laughing and takes away the seriousness of it.
- Some shots do not match with beat.
- When he is standing still he moves slightly too fast as members of public slightly wobble.
- Too dark at the end.
Feedback 2- Boy seems to be wearing different clothes in some parts.
- Good use of lighting in the beginning.
- Spend too much time on certain shots.
- Lighting towards end of video too dark.
Feedback 3- Actress smiles at times.
- Nice dimmed effect in bedroom (sepia)
- Cannot see photograph on phone properly.
- Story is easily told.
- More closeups of actor and actress needed.
- Some bits too dark.
Feedback 4- Girl laughing in argument.
- Like the shot in the graffiti scene!
- Need more close ups of him singing.
- Car scene should be shortened.
Feedback 5- Pace of editing needs to increase during chorus.
- Fades and dissolves needed especially in verses.
- Camera is too dark at end.
- Needs a final shot.
Feedback 6- Too many long shots-more close ups needed.
- Dark scenes.
- Timing issues.
Feedback 7- Some shots are repeated a little, need more footage.
- Some shots need to be clearer.
Feedback 8- Need less shots from back of body.
- Need more singing/miming parts.
- Sped up doesn't work.
- Too dark at the end.
